Portofolios

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Student ID: 07153
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Portfolio for Writing IV,
Section 1a OR 1c

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(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, Words, and More

(See: Note 2, below.)

[Please embed your proto-portfolios here; then remove this line of remarks, including the square brackets.]

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below.)

Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).

1.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates yy.mm.dd	¶	W	C	L	P	M
Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words)	Essay-01 【Web site review】	08.09.27	5+2	418 (375+43)	5	1	1	0
Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words)	ESSAY 【My favorite place】	08.10.17	5+3	472 (450+22)	0	0	1	0
Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words)	ESSAY Movie Review 【Mrs.Doubtfire】	08.11.04	5+3	459 (500-41)	4	0	1	0
Community life 08.11.17 (default length*)	Free writing: community	08.11.13	5-1	205	0	0	1	0
Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶)	ESSAY-05 『Secret of Kumamoto』	08.11.27	5+2	299	0	0	1	0
Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶)	ESSAY-06 Learning with Computer	08.12.15	6+0	336	0	0	1	0
Totals	---	---	40	2189	9	1	6	0

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments yy.mm.dd	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	MR 2-01: Important Things That She Taught Me	08.11.03	96
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	Hi, Yui.I think your essay's good point is that yo...	08.11.05	62
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts yy.mm.dd	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	Essay-01 【Web site review】	08.09.27	5 comments total:211 words
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*	ESSAY Movie Review 【Mrs.Doubtfire】	08.11.04	4 comments total: 219 words
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.

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2.6. Additional reflections on comments

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3.0. Book Reviews

3.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	BR 02-01 Submarine Adventure	08.11.19	301	0
2-02	BR 02-02 The Outing	08.11.19	248	0
2-03	Book Review-2-03	08.12.16	361	0
2-04	Book review 2-04	08.12.18	358	0
2-05	Book Review2-05	08.12.19	444	0
2-06	Book Review2-05	08.12.19	150	0
2-07	Book Review 2-07	08.12.20	200	0
2-08	Book Review 2-08	08.12.20	151	0
2-09	Book Review 2-09	08.12.22	226	0
2-10	Book Review 2-10	08.12.22	235	0
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Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).

3.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets; then identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]

4.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
4.1. Does your blog display an archive?	○
4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	○
4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?		○
4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?
4.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?		○
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)
"movies" (plural) AND "websites" (plural)
"brainstorms" (or "brainstorming"), "essay prep.," AND "free-writing" (or "free-writes")
4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?		○
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? ___ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. www (n) xxx (m) yyy (o) zzz (p) ...	---	---
4.3. Links & media	---	---
4.3.1. Does your blog include photos or other graphics?	○
Does your blog profile include a photo or graphic representation?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? ___ posts including photos or other graphics	---	---
4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links? ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
4.3.3. Does your blog include other media?		○
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? ___ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list the kinds here: ... ... ...	---	---
What media content that you originally produced, if any, do your blog posts for this semester contain? Please list and explain each item briefly, and add short links and dates (yy.mm.dd) for reference. ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date) ... (short link, date)	---	---

4.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.

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5.0. Additional reflections on your blog and your writing on it

Please feel free to include reflections on both spring and fall semester work, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, and reflections).

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6.0. Advice and suggestions for yourself, your peers, and your successors

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template derives from the templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc portfolios (2007-08), and Writing III, §§1a & 1c (Fall, 2008).
2. Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
   
3. The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
   

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Book Review 2-10

『The Cold Day』

The main character was the boy, Kipper. Kipper played in the sea with him family. Then, everyone felt cold. So they went out from the sea. They felt cold, so everyone began to jogging. However, Kipper didn't begin to jogging. His mum said him to "Come on!", but he said her to "It is very cold!" . Everyone have called him, but he didn't move, because it was very cold.

Then, The Ice cream car run near him. Suddenly, he went there running. Everyone asked him to "You are cold, aren't you?" . However, he answered "I am not cold! So I want the Ice cream!".

He like ice cream very much. So when he has found the ice cream car, he forgot the cold!

【Feelings】

The boy, Kipper was so cute boy!!

I like children such as the boy. I really like children and playing with them. When I lived my parent's house, a lot of children lived near the my house. So I often play with them. however, I don't live there, so I can't play with them. I really sad. I have a younger sister who go to erementary school now. So I often play with her when I get back my parent's house. It is so fun. And she is so cute. I want to work the place where are children in the future.

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Book Review 2-09

『The Play』

Biff and Chip went to them school with them friends, Wilf and Wilma. They all in Mrs May's class. They like her, because she is a very kind teacher.First, they had story time. Mrs Mat read the book for them. The story was about The Wizard of Oz. The girl who character of the story, her house was broken by wind, one day. The wind below the house away.

Then, the girl, Dorothy, met the Scarecrow, the Tin Man, Lion and a witch.

After the class, it was a storm. They couldn't play outside. Then a classmate had a nice idea! He said everyone "Let's play with Wizard of Oz!" . Everyone play together. Mrs May liked the little play and put on a play. Chip was the Tin man. Wilf was the Lion. Biff was a witch. The mums and dads came to them school to watch them playing.

It was time to go home. It seemed to really the world of The Wizard of Oz.

【Feelings】

This story was so interesting. I have never known the story about The Wizard of Oz. Children seemed to fun to playing with the story. I thought that Mrs May is a very kind teacher. I want to read the book about The Wizard of Oz, because it seems to interesting!

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Book Review 2-08

『The Little Red Hen』

There were a little red hen. It is scalpel, may be. She has a lot of friends, cat, duck and goose. They are very good friends. When they want foods, she cooperated with her friends.

One day, she found wheat at the grassland. She got it.

Finally, she made a bread from the wheat.

I have watched quarrel of animals on TV, but I have never seen it directly. My pets that live in my local are very good friends. They are so kind animals. My pets are dog and cats, but they don't fight.

I don't like quarrel, so I don't it with my friends and family. My friends are very kind person. So, I always thanks to them. Long times ago, when I was children, I often quarrel with my younger sister. I often make her cry. However, I don't it with her.

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Book Review 2-07

『House for Sale』

The family went to see new house. They wanted new them house. There was a house that is sold. First, dad liked this house. Mum also liked it. There are 3 children in the family. They are Biff, Chip and Kipper. They are so naughty children. Especially, Kipper is rescal. Kipper is the youngest of them. Kipper pulled the wallpaper. He also broke a chair.

Everyone of them liked this house. They may going to buy the house.

I also want new house. However, my house is enough new house. My parent's house was built about 15 years ago. I think that my house clean yet.

But, I want new house, because I want to live alone. I want it at near my university. It takes about 30 minutes by motor scooter to go to my university. I am not good at the morning. So I hasten my university in the every morning. I like sleeping, I want to sleep in the morning...

Also, I am very cold in the winter, because I go there by motor scooter.

If I can live alone, I will invite a lot of my friends to my house.

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Total: 12909 words

Book Review 2-06

『Come In!』

Dad painted his house door. And Mum went out. Then, the children came his house, because of play. Dad said them "Come in!" .

Then, a lot of children came the house to play with his children, Biff and Chip.

And Mum got back the house. When she came in the house, she was very surprised! There are a lot of children, Biff and Chip's friends, and the room was so dirtied. Biff and Chip were watching TV. Mum was angry at it.

Mum gave some biscuits for children. Then They went to home. When Mum looked at outside of the house, she was surprised! A lot of dogs gathered at around the house. Maybe, Dogs wanted some biscuits.

It was so interesting story. The painted door was dirty...

First, Dad posted attention on the door, It was teared by children or dogs without notice.

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About Disney

I really like Disney character. I have liked it since I was little child. Especially, I like Mickey Mouse and Minnie Mouse, because they are so cute. Also, I like Bell. Do you know her? She is princess. She is so beautiful. What character do you like best?

I went to Tokyo Disney Land in summer of this year. I first went there. There was so fun!! I was so happy. I bought a lot of things. For example, I bought necklace, cell phone's strap, sweets, pen, and so on. There were a lot of Disney goods. There looks dream land!!

I want to go there again. I want to see mickey and Minnie again!

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My pets

There are my pet. I have them at my parent's house. There are very cute! There are 3 pet. I also have a cat. There are so good friends.

Them name is "Quu" (dog) , "Mew" (cat) , "Shin" (cat) . Shin came to the house in summer of this year. My younger sister gave him from her friend. Shin means "kokoro" . Kokoro means "heart" in Japanese. The chinese character"kokoro" is also is read "shin" .

When I was high school student, I often play with them, because I lived in my parent's house. However I haven't see them for a long time. I really love them. I want see them soon. I look forward to winter vacation, because I will get back my parent's house. If I got back there, I am going to a lot of play with them.

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Book Review2-05

「A Fright in the Night」

I read the "A Fright in the Night" the other day. I will introduce about this book story.

There are Biff and Chip. They are brother. Biff and Chip went to stay with them grandmother's house. They went to stay for a week. They came to there by them mother's car. "Be good," said mother. "Don't worry," said grandmother. Them grandmother live alone. So, she was glad at it. Her house was small. It had two bedrooms. Biff and Chip had to sleep in the some bedroom. Biff wanted the bed near the door. Also, Chip wanted the bed by the window. "That's good!" said grandmother.

Gran took Biff and Chip for a walk. They went to the woods. Biff saw some blackberries. She wanted to pic some. Grandmother had some plastic bags. She gave one to Biff and Chip. "We can make some blackberry jam," she said. Grandmother made the blackberry jam. Biff and Chip helped. Chip made some labels and Biff licked the spoon. They made nine jars of jam. "You can take a jar home for Kipper," said grandmother. "And a jar for Wilf and Wilma." Wilf and Wilma are them friends.

They loved grandmother's house. It was very old. It had a big fireplace. Biff helped grandmother light the fire. Chip helped grandmother get some logs. "Do you have ghosts?" he asked. Grandmother laughed. "There are no such things," she said. He eased at it when he heard her word.

After had dinner, Biff and Chip went to bedroom. "Is this house hounted?" asked Biff. "Don't worry," laughed grandmother. "I don't have ghosts in my house. There are no such things."

They said grandmother"Good night.", grandmother left the room.

However...

Biff and Chip heard a noise. It came from outside. "Whoooo! Whoooo!" went the noise. "Oh no!" said Biff. "It's a ghost." Chip looked out of the window. "It's not a ghost!" he laughed. "It's an owl. Come and look." Biff and Chip looked outside. "Oh no!" said Chip. "I can see the ghost. It is a ghost this time." Biff and Chip ran to grandmother's room. "Gran! Gran!" called Biff. "There's a ghost outside." But grandmother wasn't in bed. Biff and Chip ran downstairs. "Gran!" called Biff. "Where are you? We've seen a ghost." But grandmother wasn't downstairs.

The door opened. Biff and Chip were frightened. "Oh no!" they said. grandmother came in. "We were frightened," said Chip. "you looked like a ghost." Grandmother laughed. "I'm not a ghost," she said. "I don't have ghosts," said grandmother. "But I do have two little monsters!" grandmother laughed and so did Biff and Chip.

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Look at It !!

Look at it! It is very cute! It made of leaves of ginkgo.

I have found it when I worked front of 14th building with my friend and my seniors. I think that someone made it. When I have found it, I was so glad! It made me happy. I take a lot of pictures with them.

It was night, so very cold. However, my heart became warm :)

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The World of Golden Eggs

He is Stephan☆

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My favorite animation

Please look at this! This is soooo cute!!!

This is Chiroru-chocolate. I found it at LAWSON, in KGU. When I have found them, I was very glad! And I bought them soon. There are 6 kinds of it, so I bought all kind, of course.

This is the characters of the animation. Do you know it? This name is "The World of Golden Eggs" . I have known it when I was high school student. I have watched the animation many times. It is comedy, very interesting!!

It looks American animation, but it made in Japan. Now, DVD are sold at shop. You can rental it. please try to watch it!!

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Illuminatio------n!!! 02

This also is in Kego-park. This is reindeer. It is very cute!

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Illuminatio------n!!! 01

This is so beautiful, isn't it??

It is in Kego-park, Fukuoka. Have you been there? I have never been there yet. I got the picture from internet :> It is convenient!!

I want to go there and see it! However, there is far from here. By the way, The Christmas day will come soon! Do you have any plan at Christmas? I want to see illumination at the day! I will go to see illumination and take a lot of pictures!!

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About My Younger Sister

I have two younger sister. We are good siblings. My younger sisters are 17years old and 12 years old. Now, I will introduce about 17 years old sister now.

She is high school student, she go to the school by train everyday. She is toller than me. When I get back my parent's home, I play with her. We talk about a lot of things, for example, about her school, my school, own friends, boyfriends, and so on. I can talk her anything. It is enjoy for me to talk with her.

She seems to so fun at her school. She has a lot of friends, so she go out with her friends in holiday. She likes going to Joyfull, karaoke, and taking prikura. When we play together, she talks about her friends and her boyfriends every time. She is very interesting girl.

When we are children and live together, I often quarrel with her. However, we don't it after I live in Kumamoto city. So we are good siblings! We often go shopping together. Also, I give her my clothes that I don't use. Our year old are near, so we fit about talking. Sometime, I send her e-mail. At this winter vacation, I am going to get back my parent's home. So I am looking forward to see her.

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My birthday cake 02

This is my birthday cake. I gave it in December 17th. The day was my club activity day. When I have ate dinner with my club members, suddenly, 3 people of my club members brought the cake, singing birthday song for me. I was so surprised!! And I was so glad!!!

I ate the cake after had dinner with my club members. It was delicious! It was so happy day☆

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Book review 2-04

I read a book the other day. That name is “Scarecrows” . I will introduce about this book story.

One day, Biff and Chip had a little garden. They planted seeds and they put in plants. The birds liked the garden. They ate the seeds and pecked the plants. Biff was across. “Look at the birds,”and she said birds again “Go away! Go away!”

Biff and Chip had a very nice idea. “Let’s make a scarecrow,” they said. “What a good idea,” said them mother. And, They got some old clothes and made the scarecrow’s body. Them mother helped them. Biff got a bag. Chip painted a face on it. Mother made the scarecrow’s hair.

Chip wanted the scarecrow to be a boy. He called it Fred. However, Biff wanted it to be a girl. “All scarecrows are boys,” said Chip. The key began to glow. The magic took them inside the little house. The magic took them to a field.

The scarecrow came to life. “I am alive!” called Fred. Fred jumped in the air. “It’s magic!” he called. Biff and Chip are very surprised at about it. There were some scarecrows in the lane. Fred waved at them. Fred ran up to the scarecrows. “Hello!” he called. “Where are you going?” A scarecrow pointed to a barn. “We’re going to the barn dance. You can come too.” Then the scarecrows looked at Biff and Chip. “Oh dear! You can’t come.” Biff and Chip weren’t scarecrows. They couldn’t go to the dance but Fred had an idea. Fred made Biff and Chip into scarecrows. They went to the dance.

The band began to play. “Come on ,” called Fred. “Let’s dance.” Biff began to dance with the scarecrows. “This is so fun,” called Chip. Biff danced with Fred. Chip danced with Biff. They all danced with the scarecrows. “See!” said Biff. “There are girl scarecrows. I told you so.”

Suddenly, the key glowed. It was time to go home. “Oh no!” said Fred. The magic took them home. Biff and Chip had an idea. “I didn’t know there were girl scarecrows,” said mother. “Well, there are,” said Chip.

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Book Review-2-03

『The Gingerbread Man』

I read a book named The Gingerbread Man. I will introduce about this books' story.

One day, there are an old man and an old woman. An old woman made a gingerbread. She named it "Gingerbread man" and she said "It is my little boy!", because the old parents don't have any children. When she was baking it with a gas oven, she could hear little voice in it. She was very surprised at it! When she opened a gas oven, the gingerbread man jumped out from it. And he said "I'm a gingerbread man. I can run!! You can't run as me as faster!" He went out the house and run away. An old woman said "Stop!", but he didn't stop and run faster. She and an old man chased him.

He met a cow and a horse on the him way. "I want to eat you!" They all chased him. Also, he met a fox. "I don't want to eat you. I will help you to run away from then." The fox helped him when he crossed the river. First, a gingerbread man rode on him tale, but him tale was too small for a gingerbread man. Next, a gingerbread man rode him back, but it was too small too. So, a gingerbread man rode on a fox's nose. A fox swam well in the river. A gingerbread man could without wet thanks to him. The old parents, a cow and a horse could overtake them. A gingerbread man was very glad.

However!!
They had finished to cross the river moment a fox raised up a gingerbread man with fox's' nose, and ate him leg!! He said "Oh! my leg!" Next, soon a fox ate him arm. Finally, a gingerbread man was eaten by a fox. It have finished his life... That's all this story.

《Feeling》
I felt interesting when I read till half-finished. However, I was very sad when I have knew ending of this story. I thought that a gingerbread man was very poor to he was told a lie by a fox. Although a gingerbread man believed a fox...


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ESSAY-06 Learning with Computer

Can you use the computer well? Do you often use it? The computer is so such a necessary thing in our present society. It has a lot of various type now. Now, I will write essay about the computer.

I use computer everyday. I study English with computer in my Writing class every week. I often use the computer when I have any homework. It is need for me to use computer in my university life.

I often use computer to get information on the Internet. It can know new information on the website. For example, it can watch news, shopping information, TV program website, favorite personality's website and so on.

If you want to know the newest news, you can watch the news that you want to watch. You can retrieve your favorite news in the news website. There are a lot of source of knowledge now. For example, there are newspaper, TV, radio and so on. However, if you use Internet with computer, you can watch your favorite it at your favorite time. So, computer is so convenient!!

Also, if you want new clothes or goods, I recommend to research with websites. Because I think that you can find your favorite clothes or goods on websites. So you may think that easy to go shopping. If you can't go the store, you can buy them on website. You order them that you want, and you can get them at your house. You have to pay at post office or convenience store. It is "tsuuhan" in Japanese.

Using the computer, It can wash about TV program, favorite personality's website and so on. You can know about anything when you uses the computer!! The computer is so convenient! So I like the computer, but I am not good at using the computer. So I want to be good at use it, and I want to perfectly.


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My favorite singer revew 02

Miho Fukuhara

Do you know Miho Fukuhara? She is a singer. She began to sing on TV recently. She is a cute girl, and has very very beautiful voice. I like her very much.

She came to KGU at our school festival on November2nd. I had never know about her until then, but I became like her after hear her song at then. She were kind and friendly. She sang a lot of songs at then. It was my memorial concert.

She is 21 years old now. She is a year older than me. However, she looks more adult, because she is beautiful. I like her looks, voice, and character. She has 2 younger sisters who go to elementary school now. I want to a older sister like her. I sometimes watch her blog. It is fun! I can know her information on it. For example, about her new songs, her appearance TV program and so on.

You hear her song on TV, because her song, "Love ~winter song~" , is a drama's theme song. The drama is "SCANDAL" .

Do you know it? Have you ever watched it? If You have never watched it, please try to watch it!

I like all her songs, but I like "Love~winter song~" the best. I also like "CHANGE" and

"I Believe" too. I hear the songs preparing at every morning. I am not tired of hearing her songs. I will buy her CD if she sold her album CD. She sold new song, "yuki-no-hikari" . The song also very good. The song is a advertisement of one shampoo's theme song. If I listen her songs, I can have so fine!!

I want to go to her concert again! You may become like her if you hear her song!!

That is all my favorite singer review.

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Happy My Birthday

This is my birthday cake!!!

My birthday is December 8th.

In the day, I gave a cute cake and present at just 0:00! This is t he cake. I was so glad! I had the cake. It was so delicious!! I had a lot of one.

And I received a lot of birthday mail! When I counted there, there were about 40 mails. Thank you my friends!

When I went to school at the day, my friends and my underclassman bought sweets for me. I like sweets very much! I was glad. The day was so nice day for me.

And I became 20 years old. I became from teenier to twenties. I am adult. I thought that I have to have adult thinking.

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My favorite singer review 01

GReeeeN

I bought GReeeeN's CD because I want to present. This CD is 2 type. One of it is normal type, and the another is Christmas version!! Of course, I bought Christmas version. Christmas version has a special song and greeting card!

I like GReeeN, singer group, because I like them songs! Especially, My favorite song is "Kiseki" . It means miracle and locus in Japanese. This song is very nice! I like this song's words. This is my recommended song!

The group has 4 members. They are good at singing. I like them voice. When I listen to them songs, I am happy! It made me happy.

However, GReeeeN's member doesn't open for everyone. They are dentistry college now. I want to know about them more. I like them all songs! They also sells album CD. It is so good to! Please try to listen it.

I like listening to music, and It is my hobby. I listen to music everyday. I also like singing, so I went to karaoke yesterday. It also my hobby, it is so fun!

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Free-writing

I often use computer. I use to get various informations of all others. Computer is very usufull machine. When I have things that I don't know, I use the computer. For example, I watch news websites, shop websites, TV program websites, TV personality websites, and so on.

We usually know news from newspaper or news program on TV. However, we can know news websites on computer. There are a lot of picture, so it is easy to understand for us. Also, we can retrive in the news web site, we can find the news soon, and we can watch it in favorite time.

When I want to some clothes, I reserch with computer. So, I can know about new fashion. In internet, we can find good clothes soon. Also, if you find favorite clothes, you can buy one rite now on the website. The one that you bought on the website, you can get at your house after few days. It is "Tsuuhan".

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Outline

★Introduction
Kinds of information

★Body
When I use websites on the computer

★Conclusion
Conclusion of all paragraphs

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Brainstorm

Information
Internet
News
Communication
Homework
Typing
Shopping
Blogs
Information
Music
Movie
E-mail
Convenient
Research
Chat
Difficult
Websites
Power point

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Movie Revciew

『The Color Purple』

I presented my assignment about impression of the movie in the other day. So I will write review about the movie now.

This is the story of black people, the black woman was had discrimination from white people and also her husband who is black man. She lived with him, she worked harder for him. He often ordered to her. If she talk back to him, he use violence to her. So she followed with him without talk back every day.

I really yearned for her. I think that she has strong heart, because she can stand to it. He parted her sisters. It was a only her younger sister for her to she loved person. He made a fool of her every day. So I was filled with anger at the scene.

However, after a long year, she could leave from him. So, He couldn't do anything. He couldn't house works, for example, cooking, washing, cleaning and so on. So, his house became so dirty. Also, she could have own trouser shop. She stand on her own feet! She lived happily.

《Feelings》

When I watched the movie, I had shock very much, because I pitied her. I think that she has so strong heart!! I think that she was so heavy. However, it was good to she lived happily at the last. This was good movie, because I could study about discrimination.

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Shopping Day

In December 1st.
I went to city with my friend after school, she found presents. We went to a lot of shop, and we bought clothes. I also a my cloth at shop. I was glad to I could nice one. I was happy to go to shopping with her. I want to go there again.

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Yanagimoto manager

Do you know Shoichi Yanagimoto?

He is a volleyball of Japan manager! He came to KGU!!

It was Yanagimoto manager's lecture at KGU in November 29th.

I have liked volleyball game since I was high school student, so I was looking forward to go there. I often watch the game on TV with my family, and we cheered Japan team!!

I was soooo glad when I have saw him. There were KGU students at there, also there were public. We listened his talk for about 1 hour and 30 minutes. I was glad to I could listen talk about volleyball player.

He was so kind and interesting person, and he talked us well. His talk was easy to listen.

After that, It was the time of question for him. I wanted to ask any question, but I could not it because I have had confidence at the time. However, I wanted to talk with him...

But I was happy because see him.

Sometimes, personality comes to KGU. Uchishiba, jyudo player, came to KGU, and he held lecture in the other day. I like him, so I wanted to go there, but I had class the day. I was so sad. My friends went there. I think that he is cool.

I want to invite various personality.

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