I went back Kumamoto city in the morning in January 4th, because it started my school class in January 5th. The day when I got back Kumamoto city, I said my lerative "See you...".
I have a my cousin who working in Nagoya. He is 24 years old. He doesn't get back my local town too much, because he lives very far place. He is very kind person. He often take my sisters and me to every place, forexample, shopping and karaoke.
He get back my local town by his car in New Year's Day. It took for a many hours, he said. I was surprised at it. I talked a lot of things with him. He warking everyday in Nagoya. He is hard worker. I think that he is great.I got New Year Present from him.
However, I don't play with him too much this time, because I got back early. I was sad. I don't know when I can play with him. He may not get back my local town in next summer, becase he is busy. I hope see him soon.
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2009年1月9日金曜日
2009年1月7日水曜日
A Happy New Year---!!!
It started 2009!!
Can you spend nice day at your New Year's days??
What did you do at it?
I went back to my parent's house. My Coming Age Day's ceremony held in January 3nd. It started at 10:00 a.m. I met a lot of my local friends!! Everyone became so cute! And them long-sleeved kimono were so beautiful.
I took a lot of pictures with them. Also, I met my teacher when I was junior high school student. He didn't change. I talked with him about my present school.
After that, at 6:00 p.m., I went to alumni association.
We had dinner and drunk together. We talked for a long time.
Next, we went to karaoke. We sang a lot of songs together. It finished about at 11:00 p.m.
Then, I went drive with a girl and two boys. We went to Yunoko in Minamata.
Also, we went to a shrine in Minamata, and we draw a fortune slip together. The fortune slip was very good luck!! We were so glad.
It was very very enjoyed. I thought that I want to play with them again. So, we promised to see again. Next time is Golden Week in next May, may be...
I am looking forward to see them again. I hope Golden Week will come soon!!
I think that 2009 will very nice year!!
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Can you spend nice day at your New Year's days??
What did you do at it?
I went back to my parent's house. My Coming Age Day's ceremony held in January 3nd. It started at 10:00 a.m. I met a lot of my local friends!! Everyone became so cute! And them long-sleeved kimono were so beautiful.
I took a lot of pictures with them. Also, I met my teacher when I was junior high school student. He didn't change. I talked with him about my present school.
After that, at 6:00 p.m., I went to alumni association.
We had dinner and drunk together. We talked for a long time.
Next, we went to karaoke. We sang a lot of songs together. It finished about at 11:00 p.m.
Then, I went drive with a girl and two boys. We went to Yunoko in Minamata.
Also, we went to a shrine in Minamata, and we draw a fortune slip together. The fortune slip was very good luck!! We were so glad.
It was very very enjoyed. I thought that I want to play with them again. So, we promised to see again. Next time is Golden Week in next May, may be...
I am looking forward to see them again. I hope Golden Week will come soon!!
I think that 2009 will very nice year!!
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Free Writing: My New Year
I went back to my parent's house in New Year's Day. I went there by my mother's house.
Then, I went to my grandparent's house with my younger sister. My grandmother and grandfather seemed to fine! I was glad. I got New Year's gift by them. I was so happy. Thank you very much!!
At the night, I ate dinner with them. I ate sushi. After that, I we watched comedy program on TV. I like a comic dialogue by two comedians very much!! I always watch it while New Year. I am glad to TV has a lot of comedy program.
In January 3nd, I had Coming of Age Day's ceremony. I met a lot of my local friends! I didn't met with them for a long time. I took a lot of pictures with them. It was happy day.
After that, We had a alumni association. We drunk together and we talked for a lot of time.
I had so happy New Year's days.
What did you do at the days??
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Then, I went to my grandparent's house with my younger sister. My grandmother and grandfather seemed to fine! I was glad. I got New Year's gift by them. I was so happy. Thank you very much!!
At the night, I ate dinner with them. I ate sushi. After that, I we watched comedy program on TV. I like a comic dialogue by two comedians very much!! I always watch it while New Year. I am glad to TV has a lot of comedy program.
In January 3nd, I had Coming of Age Day's ceremony. I met a lot of my local friends! I didn't met with them for a long time. I took a lot of pictures with them. It was happy day.
After that, We had a alumni association. We drunk together and we talked for a lot of time.
I had so happy New Year's days.
What did you do at the days??
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2008年12月22日月曜日
Portofolios
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Section 1a OR 1c
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0.0. Overview
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
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1.0. Essays
(See: Note 3, below.)Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
| 1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates yy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| Website review 08.09.29 (375+ words) | Essay-01 【Web site review】 | 08.09.27 | 5+2 | 418 (375+43) | 5 | 1 | 1 | 0 |
| Favorite place(-s) 08.10.20 (450+ words) | ESSAY 【My favorite place】 | 08.10.17 | 5+3 | 472 (450+22) | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Mrs. Doubtfire 08.11.04 (500+ words) | ESSAY Movie Review 【Mrs.Doubtfire】 | 08.11.04 | 5+3 | 459 (500-41) | 4 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Community life 08.11.17 (default length*) | Free writing: community | 08.11.13 | 5-1 | 205 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Kumamoto's best-kept secrets 08.12.01 (5+ ¶¶) | ESSAY-05 『Secret of Kumamoto』 | 08.11.27 | 5+2 | 299 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Learning with computers 2008.12.15 (6+ ¶¶) | ESSAY-06 Learning with Computer | 08.12.15 | 6+0 | 336 | 0 | 0 | 1 | 0 |
| Totals | --- | --- | 40 | 2189 | 9 | 1 | 6 | 0 |
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W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
M: number of other media included in post
*: "long enough to cover the ... [communities] you choose," Writing Studio Blog, Preparation for Next Essays, 2008.10.29)
1.2. Best Essay
Selection and Assessment: Which of those six assigned essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your best essay, and write out your reasons for selecting it here.]
2.0. Comments
Showcase | Titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | ||||
| 2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | MR 2-01: Important Things That She Taught Me | 08.11.03 | 96 | |
| 2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | Hi, Yui.I think your essay's good point is that yo... | 08.11.05 | 62 | |
| 2.4. Most comments on: | Titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
| 2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | Essay-01 【Web site review】 | 08.09.27 |
total:211 words | |
| 2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
| 2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
| 2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | ESSAY Movie Review 【Mrs.Doubtfire】 | 08.11.04 |
total: 219 words | |
| 2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | --- | |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | ||
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes them good comments.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- ...
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
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3.0. Book Reviews
| 3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates (yy.mm.dd) | Words | Comments |
| Example: | Vampire Killer | 07.05.16 | 39 | 1 |
| 2-01 | BR 02-01 Submarine Adventure | 08.11.19 | 301 | 0 |
| 2-02 | BR 02-02 The Outing | 08.11.19 | 248 | 0 |
| 2-03 | Book Review-2-03 | 08.12.16 | 361 | 0 |
| 2-04 | Book review 2-04 | 08.12.18 | 358 | 0 |
| 2-05 | Book Review2-05 | 08.12.19 | 444 | 0 |
| 2-06 | Book Review2-05 | 08.12.19 | 150 | 0 |
| 2-07 | Book Review 2-07 | 08.12.20 | 200 | 0 |
| 2-08 | Book Review 2-08 | 08.12.20 | 151 | 0 |
| 2-09 | Book Review 2-09 | 08.12.22 | 226 | 0 |
| 2-10 | Book Review 2-10 | 08.12.22 | 235 | 0 |
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Book Review 2-10
『The Cold Day』
The main character was the boy, Kipper. Kipper played in the sea with him family. Then, everyone felt cold. So they went out from the sea. They felt cold, so everyone began to jogging. However, Kipper didn't begin to jogging. His mum said him to "Come on!", but he said her to "It is very cold!" . Everyone have called him, but he didn't move, because it was very cold.
Then, The Ice cream car run near him. Suddenly, he went there running. Everyone asked him to "You are cold, aren't you?" . However, he answered "I am not cold! So I want the Ice cream!".
He like ice cream very much. So when he has found the ice cream car, he forgot the cold!
【Feelings】
The boy, Kipper was so cute boy!!
I like children such as the boy. I really like children and playing with them. When I lived my parent's house, a lot of children lived near the my house. So I often play with them. however, I don't live there, so I can't play with them. I really sad. I have a younger sister who go to erementary school now. So I often play with her when I get back my parent's house. It is so fun. And she is so cute. I want to work the place where are children in the future.
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Book Review 2-09
『The Play』
Biff and Chip went to them school with them friends, Wilf and Wilma. They all in Mrs May's class. They like her, because she is a very kind teacher.First, they had story time. Mrs Mat read the book for them. The story was about The Wizard of Oz. The girl who character of the story, her house was broken by wind, one day. The wind below the house away.
Then, the girl, Dorothy, met the Scarecrow, the Tin Man, Lion and a witch.
After the class, it was a storm. They couldn't play outside. Then a classmate had a nice idea! He said everyone "Let's play with Wizard of Oz!" . Everyone play together. Mrs May liked the little play and put on a play. Chip was the Tin man. Wilf was the Lion. Biff was a witch. The mums and dads came to them school to watch them playing.
It was time to go home. It seemed to really the world of The Wizard of Oz.
【Feelings】
This story was so interesting. I have never known the story about The Wizard of Oz. Children seemed to fun to playing with the story. I thought that Mrs May is a very kind teacher. I want to read the book about The Wizard of Oz, because it seems to interesting!
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2008年12月20日土曜日
Book Review 2-08
『The Little Red Hen』
There were a little red hen. It is scalpel, may be. She has a lot of friends, cat, duck and goose. They are very good friends. When they want foods, she cooperated with her friends.
One day, she found wheat at the grassland. She got it.
Finally, she made a bread from the wheat.
I have watched quarrel of animals on TV, but I have never seen it directly. My pets that live in my local are very good friends. They are so kind animals. My pets are dog and cats, but they don't fight.
I don't like quarrel, so I don't it with my friends and family. My friends are very kind person. So, I always thanks to them. Long times ago, when I was children, I often quarrel with my younger sister. I often make her cry. However, I don't it with her.
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